simple sentences

today in writhing we learnt about the structure of a simple sentences there are 2 parts to a sentences the subject and the predicate is a verb a simple sentences is also know as an independent clause because it contains one complete though for example daeton ran to the shops the subject is daetone and the predicate is ran to the shops and the verb is ran leave a nice comment.

immersion assembly

elements of drama is a one word sentence, from immersion assembly we did team 1 to team 5 and made more drama which started with team 1 which was emotion of sad scared happy and shy. and what I like about it was the song they played and when they ran after guessing who won. team 2 was the forest about the kiwi who saved the forest and can not go flying again but save the world my favourite was  he was brave and proud and team 3 was Matilda from the movie and they he had to eat the cake and what I like about team 3 is he threw the cake on the teacher and lots of people laugh team 4 was guess there emotions which was aloud to shout out the and for last was team 5 was Cinderella and my favourite and most funny was that Mr Moran had to be a princess and had to be it and it made me laugh.

this is my writing call NARRATIVE

 

This is about my writing call NARRATIVE this is when you have to writ something nice about this you can writ about i hope you enjoy

1. Once upon a time… there was a guy name Jake and he is very nice 
2. And he live in a town in America a very big town 
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 And his skill was making a house that are big and very beautiful house
4. He was very happy but bad news was that he was alone 
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And to have a women to have some company when he is not alone 
6. So he decide to move somewhere and then he met a woman who was very talented and got married and made a fortune buy making house   

drawing a alien

Here is a story where there were 3 kids in a zoo trying to find a way to escape then an alien had long claws and and can talk in there minds he made a hole for them to escape and they did with the alien and went to earth he did that for them because they wanted to go home leave a nice comment.